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Lake Isabella, CA, United States
I am an aspiring writer in the Kern River Valley. This blog is a "test kitchen" to try different writing styles and to work through the many rejections and the handful of acceptances my work has received. But no matter what other people say about my writing, at least my mother thinks I'm a good writer!

Saturday, February 27, 2010

Metaphors

A lot of poetry is made up of metaphors. My husband made up a beautiful metaphor last night.

He said:

The love I hold in
my heart for you is like boiling
water in a hot teakettle.


He made a haiku!

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